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This scorecard was produced independently as a methodology example, from the public dropmypage.com launch on Hacker News. ClawniLab is not affiliated with DropMyPage and no customer relationship exists. Findings are illustrative of our 10-point clarity methodology and do not constitute professional advice for the reviewed party.
CSPublic scorecard
DropMyPage — landing page clarity scorecard.
Scored the day DropMyPage launched on Hacker News (Show HN), straight off our public free score tool — same 10-point grid as a paid audit, no contact with the founder.
01Friction map
Three things to fix first
Ranked the same way every paid audit ranks issues — by what a stranger notices first.
Proof — 0/10
“Maya Rivera, Photographer” — the use-case cards (café menu, photographer, resume) are illustrative mockups, not real customers; no name, number or logo claims actual usage.
Fix: Replace one mockup with a named early user, their role, and a real number (links created, views).
Audience — 1/10
No buyer is named anywhere on the page; use-cases span cafés, photographers, job seekers and event hosts with no segment chosen.
Fix: Add a line under the H1 naming who it's for, e.g. “for anyone sharing a one-off page without hosting.”
Hero clarity — 6/10
“Share any page as a link. In one tap.” — states the product and outcome clearly but never says who it's for.
Fix: Add a sub-line directly under the H1 naming the audience.
02Strongest point
What DropMyPage already gets right
Consistency
“Free links last 7 days · Pro links never expire” repeated identically from the hero form to the pricing table to the footer — no contradiction found anywhere on the page.
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